I was chatting with my friend Nadine yesterday and she was explaining to me the “Haiku” so I thought that I can write many Haiku 😁 I have many random musings and why not right? Maybe it will not be 5-7-5 but hope you will enjoy it!
This is Nadine’s post and it’s great!
Check Nadine’s blog, it’s great and includes various posts and subjects written in a very deep and original way:
Thank you Nadine 😊 (No nominations here, just a thank you 😁)
Haiku # 1
Was silent as grave
I Tried to scream, I couldn’t
They stole my voice
Thank you for reading, your thoughts are always welcome 😊
Huguette Antoun – July 20th 2019
58 thoughts on “Haiku – My First Attempt”
At one time I set aside one day a week to write a Haiku. It is empowering to put the beauty and struggles of life side by side.
Thank you Maggie for stopping by, I just fixed the syllabus to match, Appreciate your kind words 🙏🏻
I never tried writing Haiku because I never understood the rules. The one I read was more complicated than 5-7-5 act. But if if it’s a first attempt. You captured that gut-wrenching truth that there’s no such thing a free speech. Often it isn’t easy to come out and say the truth. Great haiku Hug ❤
Thank you Jess for the kind words 😊 happy you loved it 😊 just fixed it a bit so the syllabus can fit the 5-7-5 rule but the words were written before and maybe next time I won’t fix it, I will break the rule a bit
Appreciate your encouragement so much ❤️
Wow!! Huguette ❤️❤️
You have a very deep and beautiful Haiku!!
Thank you Jyoti 😊 happy you loved it ❤️
My pleasure dear ❤️❤️
You sure it’s your first attempt? According to the word play, I think yes. But the feelings, 😍😍😍
Thank you Sid 😊 these words are written before, I just fixed the syllabus a bit
so for the feelings, it’s something different, there are plenty 😊
😮😮Good to know stuff. 💙
Really well done! We get asked to do these all the time at school (beautiful nature themed) so this is a nice change and I absolutely love it!
Thank you PJ 😊
I heard about Haiku only here maybe I didn’t follow the rules strictly but happy you loved it 😊
Hey! I have nominated you for the mystery blogger award! 🙂
sorry this one went to SPAM but I read the post and thank you so much 🙂
You’re most Welcome! I don’t what’s wrong with my WordPress. 🙂
Seems you changed your site name or so, your site is still not reachable, you need to fix this, I find hard time reaching your site 🙂
Yeah! I have changed my site name and that’s why it’s making trouble.
I don’t quite understand what Haiku is… but your words touched my heart and soul…That’s what matters to me❤️
I am so grateful to you❤️
Thank you dear 😊 don’t know if it’s a real Haiku after all but the matter that you loved it I guess 😊 thank you for the lovely words ❤️
Your words was so lovely, and I almoust cry, you are a wordsmith❤️
I’m humbled dear even though I don’t want to make you cry ❤️
Wordsmith I believe suits you better 😊
Take care too ❤️
I know my friend, but I am who I am, and you touch me deeply in my soul❤️
Thank you for your kind words❤️
A big hug sending over to you.
I’m lucky I actually do 😊 big hug to you as well 🤗❤️
I never heard about it before, buts yours sounds deeply meamingful💚💛🧡
I heard about it but couldn’t understand the rules
Glad you liked it 😊🙏🏻
Looks interesting, but i think to difficult for me💚💛🧡
You can try it 🙂 who knows
Maybe i will give a shot😁🤗
Well ouch. But is a Haiku, exactly?
Walla I don’t know shu ra2yik enti?
Sumn deep which is concluded into a few words? I’ve no idea 😂
Halla2 ye3ni you like it or not 🙄 my temper is getting shorter 😎
Ennu syllabus 5-7-5 mafrud w I thought why not
I do, I do. You need some chocolate XD
Ah, alright. So not trying it XD
Thanks for sharing Huguette. Loved Nadine’s blog as well.
Thank you JJ 😊appreciate your visit to this post and Nadine’s blog 😊💕
Pleasure dear 💚
Thank you =) ❤
Yay you did it =) ❤ I was so happy to see the ping on wordpress when I logged in 😀 I was not expecting you to post it this fast, this proves you’re not lazy as I am “hides face in shame”
You did wonderfully my dear, I absolutely love it ❤ it is so powerful like I told you the haiku is just 3 lines but damn they can be so wonderfully powerful just like you did in this post. I read it and I pictured a woman oppressed in our society and maybe abused by her husband or family or the second scenario an oppressed citizen in a dictatorship country. Well done, well done dear, this is very deep ❤ yalla will be waiting for more haiku from you 😀
And thank you so much for all the kind words and love you showed for my blog, you beautiful soul ❤
Thank you Nadine for the lovely words 😊 so glad you loved it! Told you I have many sentences already written I just fixed the syllabus a bit 😊
Well I just said the truth and nope I’m not lazy most of the times actually (it depends I guess)
Glad you could picture many stories from these few words, appreciate the support and kindness as well ❤️
Have a great day ❤️
You’re quite talented my dear ❤ hoping to read more Haiku from you soon.
Thank you Nadine ❤ will try some other atttempts
Hi Huguette😉 Sunday kept me too busy. I just had time to read your Haiku. Short but biting truth, Women who tries to voice out in society is been muted. You are indeed a Haiku maker.I dont know the rules too😜 But This one is too good✨👌Well Written✍️ Have a great Week 🤗✨
Thank you Simon and hope you enjoyed the weekend despite the busy Sunday 😊
Well I didn’t know the rules as well, it just needs to be 5-7-5 syllabus so I did some changes and seems it worked 😁
Glad you liked it and appreciate your time to read and interact 😊
I have seen so many writing Haiku but I never understood what is it. There are rules?
So powerful words! We are living in a world were most of the people have the right to express themselves but still some cannot or they are not allowed. 🤗❤️
well as someone explained, must be 3 lines, 5-7-5 syllabus , 1st line 5 syllabus, second 7, and 3rd 5 🙂 so I tried to fix the syllabus of something I already wrote 🙂 Glad you loved it 🤗🤗💕💕 give it a try 😊
Oh thank you for the explanation! Now I think I don’t understand the meaning of syllabus 😦 I must go and study the English language 😦
However, I loved it 🤗❤️
Oh I’m sorry it’s syllables and not Syllabus hahha and I also used google:
“A syllable is a part of a word that contains a single vowel sound and that is pronounced as a unit. So, for example, ‘book’ has one syllable, and ‘reading’ has two syllables. ”
I’m not perfect in English either, so thanks God for Google hahaha
Thank you dear 🤗❤️
Oh ok, I got it 🙂 thank you 🙂
Oh my, but is very difficult 🙂 but for you nothing is difficult when is writing 🙂
thank you Riby 🤗🤗💕💕 actually it was a bit, I hate rules but finally it was done 😀
No challenge that Huguette cannot do 🙂
Always pushes her forward! That’s the attitude 🙂
Well done Huguette!👏 Deep meaning of life struggle! 👌 💙
I don’t know what is Haiku but really this is great! 💞
Haiku is really interesting, isn’t it? It tests the ability to out your feelings and emotions in a structure. I have tried it as well, didn’t work out well maybe I will try a little more 😂 Yours is great though❤️🤗
Thank you dear and glad you liked it 😊 yes interesting indeed!
Sure you will write many Haïkus, just needs some time I guess to adjust it as per the rules
Thank you so much for your time 😊❤️
Loved it… ❤
Thank you 😊 💕